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p.hanson
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Just wrote this last night. It's short.  |
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~Tears Are Falling ~
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^ thats pretty good but pauline, ur beautiful in side and out no matter wat k?? id post mine but ofcourse i write stories not poems so ~.~ i dont feel like copying 69 pages and pasting it here...when i get it on the web i will post a link and i like it all jess and pauline
im with grim here, i didnt kno u were a writer 2 dan, thats AWESOME!!! i would love to read some of ur stuff. and i dont care how meny pags it is i still wanna read it. Writing is a great way to release your emotions...and you are very eloquent Jess. Please know that none of it is your fault. They love you the best they can, and it's not fair that you need and deserve more than they can give. But you are a warior Jess...This will pass. Stay focused on your future, and be the wonderful, beautiful girl that you are. You shine like a beacon.
i kno i kno. yeh i love writting....its one of the best ways to get rid of everything. thankz ml ur always looking out for me. Thankz pauline!!! n i hope it gets better soon. and no im not...cuting isnt good....it hurts. trust me um i kno i kinda allready got a story going but when i was writting those poems....this story hit me. its about a girl who gets beatten, neglected and hated by her mother. because her mother blames her for her father leaving them. then one day as shes going to school she gets hit by a bus and dies. she stays dead 4 5 minutes then they bring her back to life. only now the problem is when ever she touches someone she can see how and when that person will die. The power just went out and now im even colder. theres a storm going on out side. its pretty big. theres lighting, thunder and not to mention round the clock rain. im Ella Banko. im a 15-teen-year-old girl and i live with my mother. its been raining no stop for almost 4 days now. it would be cool if school wasnt on but its not. we still have to go, in the rain, were we stay through 8 hours of tourtore with teachers who are evil and hate us. im not kidding. maybe they worship satian on the lunch break. most people think that having just one parent is hard. it is. and its even harder with my mum. i know she loves me on the inside, but i dont know sometimes i think she doesnt. im just as upset that dad left us but does she have to blame me for it? hit me? neglect me? sometimes i just wonder. i mean how is it my fault dad cheated on mum, got that chick pregnant then left? personally im glad hes gone, and it shows that he never did care about me. or mum either. but mum still loves him, even tho he did cheat and leave her. shes like a stray puppy with him. he could kill her father and she'll come running back. did i tell you how long its been since he left? 5 years. he left 2 days before my 10th birthday. not a very happy birthday fro me. not when my dad leaving is my present instead of a new bike or something. i will never forgive him for it either. for some reason i think it got older in the room coz i not only sneezed but shivered to. and im starting to feel kind of hungry. i climed out of bed wrapping my blanket up around me and taking it with me. i wasnt sure what the time was. but it was really quite. well aside from the noice of the rain, thunder and lightinging. oh and the clock ticking. if the power werent out u would hear the fidge going to. the rains dimed a bit now though which is good. well not all good. i still got school in the morrning and i dont want there to be a flood or anything. the floor creeked as a walked down the hall way. i always hated that. the floor boards always creeked. and its kinda spooky right now. in a house, no power and a storm out side. i dont even kno if mums home yet. i stoped at her door in the hall way and opened it just to check. she wasnting in there. didnt hear her breathing, no lump of the bed. nothing. nothing but scilence. i closed the door and went to the kitchen. i wonder where mum is i thought as i tried to turn on the light. no light came on so i fliped the switch again. afte about 4 times of doin that i remember the power was out. "opps....i forgot theres no power" i said into the darkness. i walked over to a cobored nere the stove. its where we keep the matches. my knee wacked into something on the way. "oww...stupid chair!" i said as i rubed my throbing knee. when i found the matches in the cobord i lit one. i found wat i hit my knee against. it was a chair. ow. now where do we keep those candles. useing the match i lit i looked for some cndles. i found them. second draw in the cabinet near the pantry. the match i let before ran out so i lit abother one and lit the candel. it was a centured on, vanilla of course. i set it om the kitchen table and froze when i saw my mother. she was pased out on the floor. i would put more but im not sure if any of u will like its so....enjoy! |
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STRICKEN11
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in 1 of the other forums talking about wat we r writing is the summary of it
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grimoneus
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Just wrote this last night. It's short. |
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p.hanson
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You're welcome Jess!  You know I try to be there for you. You're my friend. And thank you grim! And for what I posted yesterday, I've been feeling like that for years...But recently, a friend of mine...(you know who you are) Told me over and over again that I'm a princess. And an eire to the big man's throne. Thanks big sis...  |
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grimoneus
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You're welcome Jess! You know I try to be there for you. You're my friend. And thank you grim! And for what I posted yesterday, I've been feeling like that for years...But recently, a friend of mine...(you know who you are) Told me over and over again that I'm a princess. And an eire to the big man's throne. Thanks big sis...  You're quite welcome,lil sis...As I mentioned yesterday,continue to post these thought-provoking poems and let absolutely NO ONE derail your dreams and aspirations. |
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~Tears Are Falling ~
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Revenge
Revenge is bitter sweet,
i will get u back
for what u did to me
u wont know when
u wont know how
but u most certainly
wont see it coming
so i bit u this warning
sleep with one eye open
look behind every corrner
and never be alone
especally in the dark
coz u never know whos lurkin
behind any conner
like a tiger
waiting to pounce
i will get u
just u wait and see
for i will have my bitter sweet revenge
for wat u did to me!
Betrayal
uve betrayed me
dont denie it
dont give me
ur lame exuses
u kno wat u did
u knew ud betray me in the prosses
so save ur sorry for someone who gives a f***
coz i dont wanna hear it
u lied to me
u broke ur promise to me
and u took everything away from me
and for that
ur dead to me
because i wont forgive ur betrayal
not this time
uve done this over and over
so just shut up
n stop saying sorry
and leave
coz ur betrayal of me
is not something im gonning to forgive
not now
not ever
wrote these two this morrning
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Revenge
Revenge is bitter sweet,
i will get u back
for what u did to me
u wont know when
u wont know how
but u most certainly
wont see it coming
so i bit u this warning
sleep with one eye open
look behind every corrner
and never be alone
especally in the dark
coz u never know whos lurkin
behind any conner
like a tiger
waiting to pounce
i will get u
just u wait and see
for i will have my bitter sweet revenge
for wat u did to me!
Betrayal
uve betrayed me
dont denie it
dont give me
ur lame exuses
u kno wat u did
u knew ud betray me in the prosses
so save ur sorry for someone who gives a f***
coz i dont wanna hear it
u lied to me
u broke ur promise to me
and u took everything away from me
and for that
ur dead to me
because i wont forgive ur betrayal
not this time
uve done this over and over
so just shut up
n stop saying sorry
and leave
coz ur betrayal of me
is not something im gonning to forgive
not now
not ever
wrote these two this morrning
i will just say it...on the revenge i pissed my pants....good job jess |
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grimoneus
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Revenge
Revenge is bitter sweet,
i will get u back
for what u did to me
u wont know when
u wont know how
but u most certainly
wont see it coming
so i bit u this warning
sleep with one eye open
look behind every corrner
and never be alone
especally in the dark
coz u never know whos lurkin
behind any conner
like a tiger
waiting to pounce
i will get u
just u wait and see
for i will have my bitter sweet revenge
for wat u did to me!
Betrayal
uve betrayed me
dont denie it
dont give me
ur lame exuses
u kno wat u did
u knew ud betray me in the prosses
so save ur sorry for someone who gives a f***
coz i dont wanna hear it
u lied to me
u broke ur promise to me
and u took everything away from me
and for that
ur dead to me
because i wont forgive ur betrayal
not this time
uve done this over and over
so just shut up
n stop saying sorry
and leave
coz ur betrayal of me
is not something im gonning to forgive
not now
not ever
wrote these two this morrning
Wow...Well done,Aussie lass! |
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SOME_GIRL
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Jess...I love "Revenge". As always, your clear, concise expression of emotions blows me away.
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« Last Edit: July 07, 2009, 12:08:38 pm by SOME_GIRL »
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Teach Me...I Know I'm Not a Hopeless Case...
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~Tears Are Falling ~
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awwww thankz grim n ml!!!!!!!!!!!!
i question wat does concise mean? is it like the way ive worded it?
Flames
like a candle
or a match
we have an inner flame
or fire
just waiting
quietly
some peoples flame is stronger than others
and bigger
more powerful
some may just be tiny
little sparks
but either way
we all have a inner flame
and that inner flame
will burst
happens to everyone
its actuality the cause for anger
you know how u get some people
who are always nice and happy
then one day
they burst
and let free all there anger
that they've kept inside
now you see what a flame represents
each person is different
each flame is different
and each flame will burst
dont matter when
or how
but you cant repress that flame forever
so ask your self
hows yours?
yeh this one just poped in my mind just now
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Childhood Memories
sometimes
when im all alone
i think
back to when i was much
much younger
when my life was easier
simpler
when it wasnt as hard..
when i had a scene of freedom
where i could just
run, scream, have fun and play
all day long
or until mum and dad said it was late
in i had to go inside
then have a bath
but then the next day i went out
and did it again
it didnt change when i went to school
i still lived without a care in the world
then as i grew older
everything changed
i got mature
and not only that
i got tied down
i no longer lived my care free life
of my childhood memories,
i had all this responsibility
maturity
and not to mention feelings
and pain
on the bright side
no one said growing up would be easy
but they also never said
it would be this complicated
and hard
sometimes
i dont want to let go
of all my childhood memories
sometimes i wish i could of
stayed a kid forever,
but i cant
everyone grows up
so as i look back
on my childhood memories
i think
no matter what
im always going to move forward
and grow up
so i guess i better start making more memories
for now..
If You Dare
tell me something
do you think your better then me?
do you think you can do what ever you want?
but more importantly
do you think you can get away with it?
let me tell you something
in a world like this one
its survival of the fittest
and the more pigheaded you are
the harder you will fall
so i dare you
you think you got game
bring it
coz im not afraid
so if you dare
it me with your best shot
try and take me down
see if you can
but dont feel bad
my little kiddie
for if you cant step it up
and make you name
dont feel bad if you fail
coz if u go home
and cry to mommy
your just proving my point
that ur a fraud
and u act tough
say ur tough
but really your not
so i will say it again
try and take me down
if you dare.
Wanna Be Bad
you cant control me
i know you think you can
but im like a flame of fire you see
uncontrollable
so when this little kitty
is tried of being a good kitty
tired of being perfect
tired of being someone shes not
she doesnt have to be
i make my own rules
live by no one else
and im just gonna be me
and i wanna be bad
do you know what happens to those
who are always trying to be good
so they suppress the bad
well let me tell you
when they finally get a taste of bad
they like it
they like it a lot
and pretty soon they forget
y there trying to be good
so they just be bad
and they have fun
and they the ones
you really dont
and shouldnt
mess with
so for me
i wanna be bad
but if you cross me
step on my toes
or piss me off in anyway
you better hide
coz you never know
what this bad girl is planing
after all
shes spent her life being good
she has a lot to catch up on
and shes had a lot of time to plan
so watch out
you never know who your messing with.
i wrote these 3 in the past hour and half.
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SOME_GIRL
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^^Jess, concise means to the point. I am refering to you tendency to just say how you feel. You are not really flowery or wordy in your writing, you are bold. You put it out there so clearly. I like that.
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ohhhh i get it now. wow thankz ml. i guess i do do that its easier to be more clear, daddy always told me, never start an arguement unless u kno ur right. and if u are make ur point be heard so instead of leading up to it, be bold and say it. tho i mostly only do that with my writting....other times im not as bold. but i stand by wat my daddy taught me, and when i start an arguement, its coz i want to get my point across and i think im right. some pplz say this is a good quallitly and i should be a lawyer coz im bold and get points across fast and simple.  but im not giving up my writing career |
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