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~Tears Are Falling ~
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^ thankz cyrus
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Sometimes letting go is hard, but not as hard as holding onto something that isnt there..
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p.hanson
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This is everything I felt yesterday...
Somebody Tell Me
Is somebody out there?
Am I worth their time?
Is my pain worth their time?
Somebody love me
Somebody hear me
Somebody notice me
Somebody hold me
Somebody tell me...
Is it okay to be normal?
Is it okay to be different?
Is it okay to feel happy?
Is it okay to cry?
To feel angry?
Is it okay to ask why?
Somebody hear me
Somebody notice me
Somebody hold me
Somebody tell me...
Am I worth happiness?
Is it okay to be me?
I don't want a lover
I don't want a friend
I want a somebody
To be there till the end
To hold me
And tell me it'll be okay
Is it okay to be a somebody?
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lisa16
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enjoyed that miley..jett..cry your heart out.. loki..and others..i will look up harry's web too. the stories and poems are very entertaining.thanks all.  i have written two childrens stories needs good illustrations,but will have to find out more about the next stage now.a bit green about the next stage, but will research what is the best thing i can do now,anyone with any good ideas i will listen too.bear in mind though i am from the u.k. i'll see if i can get them published etc.i am on my third one now.enjoying this,it is great.  |
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« Last Edit: May 03, 2009, 07:01:12 am by lisa16 »
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p.hanson
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^Thank you Lisa. |
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monsterman
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that poem was so awesome i dont know how to express my happy ness towards that iam nearly in emotional tearing good job honey
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aviation rules
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SOME_GIRL
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This is everything I felt yesterday...
Somebody Tell Me
Is somebody out there?
Am I worth their time?
Is my pain worth their time?
Somebody love me
Somebody hear me
Somebody notice me
Somebody hold me
Somebody tell me...
Is it okay to be normal?
Is it okay to be different?
Is it okay to feel happy?
Is it okay to cry?
To feel angry?
Is it okay to ask why?
Somebody hear me
Somebody notice me
Somebody hold me
Somebody tell me...
Am I worth happiness?
Is it okay to be me?
I don't want a lover
I don't want a friend
I want a somebody
To be there till the end
To hold me
And tell me it'll be okay
Is it okay to be a somebody?
Miley...You take my breath away...You express yourself so clearly and so beautifully. I am,as always, blown away by your writing. |
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« Last Edit: April 29, 2009, 11:39:58 pm by SOME_GIRL »
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Teach Me...I Know I'm Not a Hopeless Case...
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~Tears Are Falling ~
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This is everything I felt yesterday...
Somebody Tell Me
Is somebody out there?
Am I worth their time?
Is my pain worth their time?
Somebody love me
Somebody hear me
Somebody notice me
Somebody hold me
Somebody tell me...
Is it okay to be normal?
Is it okay to be different?
Is it okay to feel happy?
Is it okay to cry?
To feel angry?
Is it okay to ask why?
Somebody hear me
Somebody notice me
Somebody hold me
Somebody tell me...
Am I worth happiness?
Is it okay to be me?
I don't want a lover
I don't want a friend
I want a somebody
To be there till the end
To hold me
And tell me it'll be okay
Is it okay to be a somebody?
OMG I LOVED THAT!!... i read the changes 2 ur story...Loved it!!!! |
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p.hanson
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Aww, thanks guys! Y'all are awesome. |
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~Tears Are Falling ~
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what r u supposed 2 do,
when u have no idea y,
y u live each day,
y u say the things u do,
or even y u get up in the morring?
well c...
im at a point where,
i have no idea y i do anything anymore,
its like im a robot,
a mindless robot,
who lives each day in a slight daze,
doing things,
saying things,
and yet still lost as 2 y she does so.
yet in some ways,
this is a good thing...
c some things dont always feel the same,
not as they once did,
in a way ive reached a happieness,
and at the same time,
total disspar..
i guess..
even tho i do kinda live my life like im a robot,
mindlessly in a daze..
it helps me in a way,
2 get by..
and over come wat life throws my way
so i guess 4 now..
im gonna be me..
most of me anyway..
maybe...
this kinda just poped in my head a few days ago when i woke up.
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p.hanson
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^Hey, that's a good one! You should turn it into a song. It's really good!
Here's one I wrote for a quick assignment. It was supposed to be about what we felt when we walked into the class. It's kinda lame though...
"Does it Matter?"
Here I sit, waiting.
Waiting for something good to come out of this
Will it help my future?
Does it really matter?
Is it worth my time and anguish?
Should I pour my heart into it?
Or is it just a judgement on an A or F?
Do they honestly care what we put on paper?
Will it ever be heard?
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« Last Edit: May 08, 2009, 09:15:27 pm by mileysupporter4life »
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~Tears Are Falling ~
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really?? a song?? u think? hmmm i suppose it would sound pretty good on an acustic guitar...with a nice melody playing and maybe a drum beat....and if i up the tempo....add a courus...divide that up into verses...and we might have a good song working...
^ loved that.
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~Tears Are Falling ~
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sorry 4 the massive delay...here some more of my story.
days have past and things arte getting any better. 4 one all those roumors about me have spread like crazi. some pplz r 2 afraid 2 look at me now. not that i care. its kinda wat i wanted in the first place. im better off on my own. saves everyone else. from more things then some can imagine. May doesnt want 2 skip town yet. she kinda likes it here....i dont c y though. and worst of all, i still havent found out who that guy was yet. its driving me crazi! and wats worse is i cant stop think about him either. which is obviously NOT a good sign. but its like taking me over. i need 2 find out about this guy. i tied 2 do some snooping but i didnt get a good look at him so i cant identify him. lunch is here. i need my blood. i left it 2 late again...i knew i should of had it at recess.....danmit y did those stupid girls have to be in the bathroom at that time. i cleaned up and gathered my stuff really fast. the bell rang and i was heading 4 the door in seconds. as i walked past them, i heard thoses 2 girls that were in the bathroom the other day laugh at me. im not sure on there names. but y r they laughing at me? shaking my head i walked out the class room door. thats the good thing about being the frak out cast, ur always either the first or last 2 leave the class room coz no one wants 2 be near u. well appart from in gym. surprisingly EVERYONE wants 2 kno me in that class. for a normal human, the would of never seen this coming but even with my higtened sences it happened all 2 fast 4 me 2 kno wats happened.
as i leave the class room next thing i kno, im falling and i have 2 guys coming at me from different sides. i doge there attacks easy but then i slip on some goo or somrthing thats on the floor. i fall 2 the floor, face first. large amouts of pain wash over me. but the pain was nothing. i mear childs play. still my nose kinda hurt. my recovoy wasnt quick enough. the two guys who were coming after me b4 recoverd them selfs and charged at me again. one got a clean punch on my right cheek as i was trying 2 stumble 2 my feet. come on! if ur not faster then some humans then u'll die with valtarri. pick it up! another punch comig my way i grab the fist and squezee. the guy yelps in pain. using him, i help my self up then i spin around slam a kcik in the guys chest and push in 2 the floor. doing all that while shill holding his fist. i dislocated his shoulder. i let go and he falls to the ground yelling in pain. a crowed has already formed. no one was cheering me on. they were all shouting, "get the b*tch!" and "teach her a lesson" not that i care. this is self defecnce. they came at me. the other guy came changeing at me swing a blow 2 my head. he seemed 2 be moving so slow that it was hardly effort dodhing his lame attempt 2 a punch at my head. kneeing on the ground now a swing my leg around and the guy falls 2 the floor. letting out a protest of pain he gets bac up. im already on my feet, fighting position ready. i wouldnt swing at him. not unless he attacked me first. he charged, fist flying through the air. i doged his attacks with little effort. and he kept throwing punches. he began to grow tired. i was 2 fast 4 him. staggering he makes one last finnal punch in mid air then collapces. hes past out on the floor then all the wispers started. my sensative ears where over whelmed. i cluched my ears and fell 2 my knees trying 2 block them out.
"howd she do that?" "i told u she was evil" "u think shes a which" "look at her, not a scrach, did u c wat she did 2 them?" "im telling u, shes not human...."
make them stop.....please....
shutting my eyes tightly and clenching my ears tightly trying 2 shut out the wishpers my heart beats faster. f***! no...no no....i waited to long....its only the begining...but i need 2 leave....now....i got up off my knees, grabed my bag and began to run. i got to the end of the hall way when someone called my name. i froze. the whispers stoped. and i sucked in my breath as the princibale walked over towards me. danmit!
"hmm....so wats all this then?" he asked me..
i opened my mouth 2 say the attacked me when everyone from the crowd bet me.
"she attacked them 4 no reason!"
"shes a monster! she should be locked up!"
"the were just walking past when all of a sudden she startd beasting them up!"
they were all truning against me. trying 2 blame me 4 a crime i did not comiot. bastard. i clenched my fist and was just about 2 speek whe i was interupted again. this time by the princibale.
"Everybody quite down!" he yelled and everyone obayed. lowing his vocie he says slowly to me. "Now allay....my office now! we need 2 sort out this mess" i could tell there was some anger behind his words. maybe hes tired of mengy fights at school. idk...maybe.
"yes Mr Princibale. right away sir" i said softly. he nodded so i started walking. as i was walking i had 2 cross the same 2 girls who were laughing at me just b4 i was attacked. they were nealing beside the guy whos arm i disslocated. one a evil glare at me the other a big evil grinn on her face. she mouthed "this is just the begining' i heard her loud and clear. shes wants me gone. she even sacrifised pplz 2 do that. she set them up 2 attack me. and she menipulated the crowd to go against me. its all part of her plan 2 get rid of me. but if this is just the begining....who knows wat she has planed for me next....but y i wonder...
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p.hanson
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^Hey that was really good! Thank you for posting it! That's so mean of those girls. She's just a new student. What do they have against her? I wonder what the principal's gonna say to her. I loved that! |
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~SoMeOnE fOr mE~
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to cry
is it always like this
tears?
do they fall unexpectedly always
do they linger there
never
do they know
do they love
can they tell im alone
thats not always when they fall
they fall wereever they may
whenever i lay
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.pleasure miley. 
