If you were to write a book or a movie script, what would it be about?

[~Tears Are Falling ~]

k pauline i read the hole thing.....again !!

LOVED IT!!

the bit with Maya and Jason was kinda sad tho...

and the scence right b4 her mum locks her out in the rain with her dad was f***ed up....but good...if u kno wat i mean?
n the part where shes beats the hell outta that chick was cool...and its more realistic coz u made it so she was scared and nervous to tell the princibal wats wrong...which was really good!!!

LOVED IT PAULINE cant wait to read more 

[p.hanson]

^Thanks Jess!

And yea, Laurie pretty much took her best friend away from her. And was really quick to judge her.

And I agree, the least her dad could've done was reassure her a little bit.

lol. And yea, that girl kinda had it coming.

And really? You think it's more realistic?  And yea, she was pretty much having a panic attack in the office, and the principal finally gained her trust. To bad she couldn't help her much...

[~Tears Are Falling ~]

yeh i do think so. coz if ur mum beat the hell outta of u u wouldnt be to keep on telling anyone about it, coz ur scared ur mum will find out and the emotion behind the trama of having it happen to u...so its good that she was reluctant to tell her coz of that. it makes it seem more believe able if u kno wat i mean?

n ur welcome i really LOVED it i cant wait for more!

[ProMiley]

Yea, I see what you mean. And I agree. Also, scared of what they'd do. Lack of trust...

Wait until you hear what Michelle does to her a while before that...

[ScreenWriter]

<3That's what I do for a living<3

I love Screenwriting, but sharing ideas with strangers is never a good idea. 


Just a piece of advice.

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[ProMiley]

^Oh, you mean me? Just wondering...